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you're amazing!
However I find two things a little awkward. Her breasts and right foot. The initial "pencil" looked fine but once you inked and colored it up I felt that the values of these two areas seemed off.
I'm not too good with technical terms but the highlights on her chest seems to sit a little oddly with the surround flat black.
Her left foot doesn't seem to be resting completely well on the ground... seems a little floaty. The overall tonal range in her left foot and chest area could be a little more detailed I think...
I wish I could communicate what it is that I'm thinking exactly much better... unfortunately I have to study up on my art vocab.
I do admire your other works btw
So knowing that there are flaws in every piece - real or imagined - ask yourself this: are they a bad thing? Some would say a piece lacks character and soul if it isn't at least a little flawed.
Whatever I pointed out earlier was distracting to me PERSONALLY!
The dude is a leagues above as an artist than I am. Whatever I wrote was implied as doubts more than anything, that I was hoping the artist would clear up for me.
"Dramatic," eh? I was giving you food for thought; if you're this defensive, perhaps you should consider a different vocation.
I appreciate you trying to give me something to think about.